All Comments on 'Snorkeling in Jamaica'

Boring without any dialogue and without any drama or development. Just a vignette that starts nowhere and leads to nothing.

I expected the payoff would have been, her allowing the slips in and out of her cunt would result in a baby baking in her belly, making it obvious she cheated. Then out the door she goes.

Put your black cock myth enhancing bullshit story where it belongs. 1☆

Hot’r’n Hell…

...the divorce is final

Would someone please come up with an original story? Any story about Jamaica is going to follow the predetermined programmed plot devices. A big dicked black Jamaican, ☑️. Let's make it more than one, ☑️. Bones a slut wife in front of her cuck husband, ☑️. Wife absolutely loves it, ☑️☑️☑️.

The only real differences between stories found in the Jamaica themed menagerie is; the names of characters, the personal background of characters, and somewhat varying degrees of their personal levels of hedonism. You can't get more lackluster than a good Jamaica story and there aren't any good ones.

No way your wife character isn’t cheating on hubby when she got back. He is now far back in second place and will never be number one again. Loserville

Well that was a death sentence of STD's and worse.

Another big d Jamaica party does anyone go there for anything else

Real smart, fucking strangers anywhere, but at a vacation resort? I'm sure she's the only woman he had his dick in in a while. Like since last night? Hope she's got great medical insurance, and didn't want any children.

As a new writer, if you can't use tags, that disrespects your readers. Also, I've seen longer missives written on matchbook covers. You write well, but post an actual story next time.

Thought it was hot story. Many go to Jamaica and other islands and fuck the locals or other travelers. It the party drunk being away from home attitude that’s gets the crazy fucking going. My old coworker went with wife to Barbados she bought him a deep sea fishing trip. He went but boat had to return with really bad stoat sea. He got back to room and his wife was getting pounded by their young waiter . Also had two friends that worked hedo resort for two years. They said their black cocks we’re in multiple white woman a. Few times a week. Crazy but true and what guy wouldn’t want it to be him

Ridiculous69 said,

No way your wife character isn’t cheating on hubby when she got back. He is now far back in second place and will never be number one again. Loserville

How would you know or how could you know, they are fictional, even if they weren't you still couldn't know!