All Comments on 'Snow Day - Meeting Claire Ch. 01'

Too short but I am liking it.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Fantastic opening! I am hooked. Looking forward to the next parts

Hooked — love the humor around the snowblower; perfect introduction to Claire. Oh, and can believe his life will not be the same.

This has REAL potential to be utterly superb. And ok, so there's no actual action yet, but you've set the scene brilliantly. Looking forward to more of this, that's for sure! A definite 5 stars!

Love the way Ms SWP senses and expresses male submission and the power of small humiliations, first by reversing his assumptions about manly control of the machine, then by getting him to agree to be bare chested in the cold. Her stories have great dialog, detailed settings, and not the usual stereotypes of domme/sub stories. Looking forward to more. 5*

Fabulous setup. I love 💕 this author’s writing. Can’t wait to see how this story develops.

GREAT opening ! More please

Great start to an even better adventure for gray.

Excellent set-up, you definitely aroused my interest.

An interesting and promising start. I can't wait to see how the willing victim will fall into the web or the paws of her manipulative neighbor. I think he dreads it but does nothing to escape. So much pleasure or torments to look forward to... Yes, let's see