by overdado
Da’fuq did I just read?
Goddammit, this story killed my erection. How can you be so bad at writing sex that you killed the mood.
You literally had one job.
strange. Instead of being proud that her husband trusts her she takes it as him thinking that no man would want her so in anger she decides to cheat with an old boyfriend. Pretty sad.
Hopefully she contracted HIV at Oscar and dies a slow and agonizing death! I hate cheaters!
Obviously her husband has no emotional attachment to her. She is just a handy piece of ass who also does the housework. None of them are as principled as a dog in heat.
Plain stupid, right? Right! And boring too. Even John Snow wouldn’t have saved this drivel. Maybe the dragons, burning everything to ashes.
Back to square one, should I write or should I go?!
Definitely GO!
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Crap! I was trying to scroll down the page and accidentally hit 5 stars, I feel like puking!
As for writing, it was 3, story line, a2. NIT a !
Fortunately, I didn’t accidentally score this *1 story a *5. I gave it a grudging *2.
Umm the husband doesn't believe the wife would cheat on him the wife doesn't seem to want to either but then changes her mind and she gets fucked and by the Oscar. She then confesses and they use him as a phone threesome...and no ond seems to care at all just another day or night in this couples no emotional lives. I hope they don't have kids.
This husband be like, "You can screw my wife, but don't ask to borrow my power tools, my guns of my golf clubs."