All Comments on 'Snowball's Chance'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Gripping story

A very good read that left me feeling pleased. It had to have a happy ending, as all good historical romances should. But getting there certainly had its ups and downs and twists. Lovely setting, and written with a great feel for the historical period. Very fine romance.

Congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very well done.

I'm a big one for happy endings and I loved the road you took to get it there. Sex in a coach under ermine furs really does sound fantastic. Nicely done.

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonover 16 years ago
Sweet

I was a bit sceptical as i noticed this was your first venture into this category. However, im ashamed i doubted you considering how brilliant all your other stories are. I should have known better; this didn't disappoint. I loved it. It was erotic and sweet. You should do some more in this category because as always you're brilliant!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 16 years ago
I also like

happy endings, and this turned out happy for everybody, even her rotten strpfather, unfortunately. I did have some trouble following the foreign names and words, though.

hedi6789hedi6789over 16 years ago
nice!

i am german but not living in germany at the moment and reading your stories that take place in germany is always nice... with this story i also like that you chose old fashioned names fitting the historical setting. shows your knowledge.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Romantic

I loved how you put all those German words in it without making it sound like you were showing off. Otherwise, only four stars because I would have wished for more details, more sex, less story. But well-written. You're good

freshfacefreshfacealmost 16 years ago
Nicely Written

The details and historical setting really enhance this story. You have a talent for creating elaborate settings with just a few words. I enjoyed the misdirections throughout and the happy ending.

freshfacefreshfacealmost 16 years ago
Nicely Written

The details and historical setting really enhance this story. You have a talent for creating elaborate settings with just a few words. I enjoyed the misdirections throughout and the happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Clydesdales are not gray!

Clydesdales come in only one color, bay, not gray. Other than that, great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

kinda confusing but overall cute and good story

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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