All Comments on 'So Be It'

As soon as the pov is revealed to be a man getting ass fucked I threw up in my mouth and quit reading. The fag tag would have been a good warning.

Is this the wrong story/ technical issues ?

What the hell was that

? Wrong category?

That was painful. As bad as about 99% of fictional writing in the present tense is, this is worse because the person who typed it out doesn't even know what present tense is, evidenced by the inability to stay in the present tense.

The stilted language is what one would expect from a 12 year-old.

I found nothing redeeming about this. I'm sorry I read it.

How old are you? This reminded me of ‘This one time at Band Camp….’

I stuck my flute up my pussy!