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Northpacific2017almost 6 years agoInteresting
Story in my opinion has potential, but To be a romance, you need more inter-play in your characters, and to build some depth in their characters. The tail end was rushed,
granted a happy ending. Over all not bad at all for a first. Hope you write more.
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