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dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

“I felt a little like a Kardashian“ caused coffee to erupt through my nose, Baladeer. JP Kardashian indeed. There’re a lot of not laughs in this chapter but goodness this is some fantastic prose. The future is bright for JP if he stays out of his own way. What a great adventure he’s on. Five Stars to light the way…

BaladeerBaladeeralmost 2 years agoAuthor

This is a transition period I think. JP has to flex a bit, being free for the first time in his adult life, but he's too mature to fill the cliché of midlife crisis. Might be a love interest soon though.

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