All Comments on 'So Many Naked People: First Swing'

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wdelanderwdelanderover 14 years ago
warm and sexy...

Nice pacing, and very hot. I love the way you describe feelings, not just physical details, and the first-person viewpoint really works for this story. Thank you!

ghosttyperghosttyperover 14 years ago
very descriptive

very nice. story had me going the whole time. i wonder if first times are really that good?

pleasantmanpleasantmanover 14 years ago
Very good

Very well written. well paced build up, and nicely detailed sex. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please write more...

this story just cries for several additional chapters!

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Animals in the jungle are.more human that these whores.

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