All Comments on 'So There You Have It'

by submale1968

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But story and sex move ahead much too quickly.

Needs more teasing. More dialog about how long he's wanted to be dominated. How he's imagined being dominated. Dies he watch femdom porn? Does he masturbate to it? How often? What he'd like to have her do to him.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

All that erotic experience and NO Chastity device locked in place at the end before the reveal of "Miss E". (4 Stars)

The ending alludes to a possible series. That could be interesting, as they both learn as they explore this new lifestyle. Lots of room for imagination in the story.

submale1968submale1968about 2 years agoAuthor

There is a part 2 already. Just waiting on the site.

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