All Comments on 'Soccer Bitch Boys Pt. 05'

Do NOT feel insecure! Your writing is great and includes the right amount of emotion to go with all the horny sex. This is a family dynamic that many of us dream of but could never act out so it perfectly fulfills our fantasies.

Your writing is good! Don't fret over it. The psychological games and degradation are just as important as dirty sex in these stories and you do those so well! I hope you release the next chapter soon, I really wanna see how far the dad-son duo go to please Julio.

This was so sexy!! Definitely love for Bruno and jack to get slutted out together more often, more of the red shirt soccer team could be involved! Definitely love if Bruno and jack had more involvement with each other too 😈