All Comments on 'Societal Submissions: New laws!'

Excellent start, Tori. So many directions to take the story.

Good start needs to be longer. Please continue.

Well, a little short but a good start to many adventures for Emma. THere are so many options to explore and I hope the author has a great many situations for Emma. Some situations could be mild and some could be pretty dark. More please.

nice intro, more please

Mmmmm, a lovely start to what i hope is a long and fascinating story. I look forward to seeing where You go with subsequent chapters! Thanks for sharing. -n

There is nothing Romantic about slavery, or Fascinating about it..

The goal of this is to act as a primer for my world of story and to explore the setup with Emma in her own stories as well as some other characters dealing with this. A shared world anthology of kinky fun.

A nice start. I’m looking forward to seeing where you take Miss Emma.

well done, you. Set up well to fit in with 34th amendment world.

This would be uninteresting as a standalone story, but very exciting as a setup for other stories. Please develop it