All Comments on 'Soft Incentive Pt. 02: Finale'

You clearly had this marked for extension. Why stop? Good story, solid plot but you just walked away. Why?

Some of your other stories are wonderful and work even with their quirkiness. This one didn’t, and I think it’s because you didn’t have enough reason for caring about the characters. We don’t know much about the protagonist other than she wears a hoodie, has to use the bathroom and is horny. Jessica is just a spoiled bitch who needs to learn a few lessons. There’s no meaningful interaction to make anyone endearing. The story kind of sits dead in the water looking for a reason to go on. Thankfully you recognized there wasn’t one.

I could see another chapter of this. I'm curious of what will happen next.

Fucking loved this! Can we see what else happens on those other eight days?!