All Comments on 'Softball Tryouts: Strike Two'

Wild and crazy fun storyline, intriguing characters, good dialogue and love the softball backdrop — felt like maybe you played at one time.

Great story have not read your first works but will start my 12 part journey. Love your writing style.

That was HAF! Bella made the story. I'm not big into romance tales. No mistake, I hate stroke stories. They're dumb AF. I just like a well written story where lust is prevalent and wins out. But that's just a personal preference. Objectively speaking, this was very well written and has hot sex in it. Can't wait for chapter 3 and I give you 5/5 stars. You deserve it.

Dewey Cheatham

Tried posting a comment when first read, but no show. So try again: The competitive scene, the personalities, the intense sex — well done; captivating. Not so sure about Bella three way — saw it coming but still a bit odd; almost detracts from what you had going with Riley and Becca. Regardless, I like the dialogue, engagement between characters, intensity of competition. By way, you must have played at some point. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Enjoying this trilogy very much. Can't wait for part 3. Loved how Bella got into the mix (I was hoping she would) and I'm hoping coach gets into the mix too.

If you'll email me, I can point out a couple minor errors. They aren't any big deal.

One of the best stories I have read in a long time. Wonderfully written.

Young hormones gone wild. I’m so glad Riley and Becca buried the hatchet. The scene in the stairwell was so full of frantic lust.

This has been a fun ride. I'm looking forward to see how you end it. Though the neighbor girl randomly joining in the muff diving was an interesting twist. That being said I do think you need to deal with the reality that your 2 softball players are not in fact gay, and Beck is going to draw attention from guys. So far that has been ignored, but at some point that will become unrealistic

I was so confused when bella joined the mix, still unsure how i feel about that but excited for more either way