by MoriMaster
More please
It has a really nice beginning. And I really can't wait for you to add more
agreed!
Not really much to comment on.
nicely written, if you write more i'd suggest longer chapters
great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Same as junebug and a five.
this is a really good start, hope to read more n the future.
Write more!
Not too hard to follow and a good storyline