by MoriMaster
Not too hard to follow and a good storyline
Write more!
this is a really good start, hope to read more n the future.
Same as junebug and a five.
great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
nicely written, if you write more i'd suggest longer chapters
Not really much to comment on.
agreed!
It has a really nice beginning. And I really can't wait for you to add more
More please