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donaldelliott11over 6 years agoGood start
The plural of "guy" is "guys", not "guy's". You have an apostrophe where you shouldn't many times in the story. I'd be happy to proofread for you before you post more chapters.
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Anonymousover 6 years agoWell, this has promise!
Very hot - keep it cumming!
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