All Comments on 'Сome to me mom, Pt. 02'

You may wish to decide whether you're telling this story in the first person or not. You keep switching from I to he, which is very disconcerting to read.

I'm sorry Westcam, but I wrote on my own behalf and so that you understand in the original text there is no word he, only on my behalf there is, I did not find an editor in English so that he could use Google translator, I translated it with the help of a translator, he probably translated it like that

Loved this story but I thought he was a little rough on his mother, the russian theme was different gave it a 5 and waiting on more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You're mixing first and third person all the time. A real pain to read.