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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
NOT A WINNER

2 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
*****

Well written!. Nasty! Good job!

imsbillyimsbillyover 8 years ago
What?

What is up with the you this and your that? It really can't be that hard to give somebody a name in these stories. I was only able to read the first couple of lines before I had to stop. Sorry, but I just can't get into a story with the main player being "You." If you rewrite the story, please me me know and I'll attempt to read it again.

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Biography, hmmmm. How about just the here and now? My first attempt as an amateur author was in my estimation a flop. It'll stay up as a reminder for me. I love to read. Since I was 3 or 4 and my mom taught me to read "Green Eggs and Ham" I haven't stopped. However, ...