All Comments on 'Something Lost - Something Gained'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Weird shit right here. Did Hayley slip some sort of drug into Ron's food or drink. Nothing in the narrative seems to suggest it. The author seems to be saying this was some spontaneous transformation. Hey, if that's how you want to play it, it your universe. Overall well written but so far removed from reality it cannot be taken seriously.

StrattonChambersStrattonChambersover 2 years agoAuthor

Yeah, weird, but that’s why it’s under humor & satire. Ni, no drugs or nefarious plots by Hayley to emasculate her husband. It just spontaneously happened. Like the movie Watermelon Man, in which a white suburban guy woke up one morning black, and had to learn to adapt. Hayley’s doing the best she can, which is surprisingly good.

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