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All Comments on 'Something Overheard'

by Bflohack

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puppoppuppopover 3 years ago
The story had a breathless quality to it!

I liked how you conveyed the urgency of the moment. Everything was now and you made it work pretty well. Liked the ending and the mainline express pace of your narrative. Keep writing.

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