by ausfet
One of the things I’ve loved about your stories is the lack of manufactured drama. The Liesel/money drama in this story rang false - it seemed as though you felt the romance couldn’t survive without some kind of plot tension so you forced that aspect into the story. I think it detracted rather than enhanced.
Loved the girly drama, dahling. Liesels DO exist! Thank goodness for the McGraths of the world, eh?
Australia, land of venomous...everything! I worried for the rest of this story that someone was going to get stung. A good lesson in maintaining dramatic tension!
Another fun read with a character-driven plot. The sex ain't bad, either.
One of your best, nice touch of drama and doubt. And the sex scenes were hot as fuk. 😊
Loved it - very well written, with great human insight, and describes perfectly the atmosphere in a North Queensland coastal town. Sits very well, near the top of your collection of stories - I knew you'd come up with something for 'in a sunburned country'.
Such clever dialogue and quick-witted responses.
You must learn to tidy up the details in your stories.
Loved it, a definite five-star romance.
Lue