by ausfet
You must learn to tidy up the details in your stories.
Loved it, a definite five-star romance.
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Such clever dialogue and quick-witted responses.
Loved it - very well written, with great human insight, and describes perfectly the atmosphere in a North Queensland coastal town. Sits very well, near the top of your collection of stories - I knew you'd come up with something for 'in a sunburned country'.
One of your best, nice touch of drama and doubt. And the sex scenes were hot as fuk. 😊
Australia, land of venomous...everything! I worried for the rest of this story that someone was going to get stung. A good lesson in maintaining dramatic tension!
Another fun read with a character-driven plot. The sex ain't bad, either.
Loved the girly drama, dahling. Liesels DO exist! Thank goodness for the McGraths of the world, eh?
One of the things I’ve loved about your stories is the lack of manufactured drama. The Liesel/money drama in this story rang false - it seemed as though you felt the romance couldn’t survive without some kind of plot tension so you forced that aspect into the story. I think it detracted rather than enhanced.