All Comments on 'Sometimes Dreams Come True'

by Edey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, as usual, you get *****s for another of your wonderful stories. I'm kind of on the fence about continuing this one. It would be nice to see where you decide to take this new relationship, but I'm leaning towards ending the story here and leaving Lake and Ace's future to the readers imagination. I'm sure though, whatever you choose to do with these characters will work out. Have a happy holiday Eraj, hope your new year is joyful, and may your mind be filled with many more beautiful stories to write. MLF

denrondenronover 1 year ago

I love this story. So sexy, so arousing. I would love to find a man to make love with!

Laura1234Laura1234over 1 year ago

Yes please continue!! Love this and all your stories !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes. Please continue.

BlowPopJBlowPopJover 1 year ago

Yes on the follow up please

bearboy1492bearboy1492over 1 year ago

I would like a sequel where he knows he’s fucking Lake and do other things his ex wasn’t as good at

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful, short but steamy story! Keep up the good work, eraj!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ooooh, I enjoyed it a lot. The idea of sleeping with somebody whos drunk was always super arousing for me, I had such a situation in my life before and I loved every bit of it, so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting story, please continue, I'm curious if Ace is gonna touch Lake's dick!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story as always, but I must say it is a bit rushed compared to your others. Felt like it could have used at least 2 more pages. Still, love your stories!

EdeyEdeyover 1 year agoAuthor

@BlowPopJ

Thank you, I will see what I can do :)

@ Anonymous

I hope I will continue the story to your liking :)

@Laura1234

Thank you so much, Laura!

@denrondenron

I sincerely hope you will find such a person ;)

@MLF

Thank you friend, nice to see under this story also! I appreciate you being here :)

I will see what I will do about the story follow-up :)

@bearboy, it will be exactly like that :D

EdeyEdeyover 1 year agoAuthor

@Anon

thank you so much!

@ Anon

Yes! That can be interesting, although it had to be the right person :)

@Anon

I promise you, you will know soon :D

@Anon

I know, but I have problems with finding editors for longer stories.

Still... it will have two more pages with the chapter "Sometimes dreams come true: Finale"

It should be "Sometimes dreams come true: Conclusion" but the title file is limited to 34 characters ;)

Tasmanian_toungueTasmanian_toungueover 1 year ago

Wonderful story, keep them cumming ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue!

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonover 1 year ago

Very nice a perfect story. Me I like one-shots but if you have more with Lake and Ace let their relationship develop. let us learn more about them. I'm sure we are all in on the ride, thanks for sharing...

EdeyEdeyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you, Sabrina, I will see what I can do :)

LoganPrejean337LoganPrejean337over 1 year ago

5 Stars - this was just excellent. I wondered where this was going and if I would enjoy it and wow, did I. This story has a bit of everything. The powerful lust in both of these characters... the conclusion was simply perfect and exactly what I was hoping for. Keep up the amazing work, as I am a huge fan! Thank you!

EdeyEdeyover 1 year agoAuthor

@LoganPrejean337

Thank you, Logan I appreciate your opinion so much, since you are yourself very talented writer, your words are especially important for me! Thank you kindly for your comment and voting.

Jerome_PlamondonJerome_Plamondon4 months ago

Good fantasy, but Ace is not enough. Sorry that Lake is stuck on him. He should be with a homosexual, not a failed, self pitying straight guy.

EdeyEdey4 months agoAuthor

@Jerome_Plamondon Well, we are all entitled to our fantasies, even if they are not perfect right? That's the story about ;)

Evan_5Evan_512 days ago

The story is good but lake deserved something better, someone who really loves him and isn't ashamed to be with him, not this hetero loser who keeps feeling sorry for himself in the corners.

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I'm originally from Eastern Europe. I love to write stories in my native language, but occasionally I try myself in writing in English. I write mostly GAY and TRANS ROMANCES = love+sex stories, with twinks, femboys, t-girls and crossdressers, and _feminine_males in general. I ...