All Comments on 'Sometimes it Gets Complicated Pt. 01'

Whew! Intriguing story line with a few twists already in this first installment. Confusing and complicated but very erotic vignettes with Kate. When Ivy returned to the house and things got heavy with John, well … I’ll just say that you have me waiting impatiently for your next chapter.

Very well written. HiddenQuill. Don’t hide your pen any more.

Good build up! Nice twists in a complicated but fun way. Got me hard, which is the point! Looking forward to what is cumming in part 2.