by Shady_Lady
What s brilliant tale of love, loss and new love found. Then throw in some hot sex. What more can you ask for.
...unpleasant and gripping. It looks as if in Rebecca's case it should be a matter of "Physician, heal thyself!" The thought that someone like her should be compelled to subject herself to such abuse in expiation for what was probably no more than a minor betrayal. Although I found the chapter distasteful, Julie, the standard of writing makes me want to see how the story develops.
I spotted what was probably a typo. You write about Lucy leaving home and the quarrel with her mother and then a couple of paragraphs on it's "The next day Tracy left home..." I take it this should have read 'Lucy'.