All Comments on 'Sometimes, Often'

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KleiokoKleiokoover 5 years ago
Mood

This is exactly how I feel about my long distance crush and exactly what I do. I think of him near constantly and the thought of him kissing me puts me in tears. 10/10

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good start

This a good start for a story, but is only a start. Now go back and create the rest of the story of how you meet, have a falling apart because of poor communication. Then have a good hookup and develop a relationship. Whether the relationship lasts long enough to become lifelong is up to your creative mind. But, do yourself and us all a great favor and go back and finish what you have started.

You appear to have a good creative mind, USE IT!

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