All Comments on 'Sometimes Things Just "Cum" Together... Pt. 04 - Finale'

Good story, the ending felt rushed. The brothers fucking her could have lasted a few more paragraphs. Still , hope Tanya's adventures continue.

You write VERY well. I look forward following you and reading more. I am a top Daddy, and Tanya’s escapades really excite me.

I offer constructive feedback only because I think you have great potential. I suggest you find ways to draw things out. Linger more over details…thoughts, feelings, fantasies. Build us up as much as you do Tanya, and make us for her as she is for M.

Keep doing what you are doing. I want more!