All Comments on 'Sometimes We Need To Be Forced'

Piece vs peace

Not great.... Work on the English and grammar.

Stilted writing style with numerous errors. Use an editor next time, if a next time you are determined to have.

with a middle class - suburban happy end -

It is true! This is a vulgar rape with a middle class ending, low class even. Most of my tales i try to write a little more elegantly, but this was suppose to be rough and dirty! lol

He sees her sleeping underneath the covers, sleeping calmly. He rises to his feet, and comes to her bedside. This woman was all that mattered to him. Once she was his, life would be his! With much force and speed, the shadow leaped upon her, causing the woman to awaken suddenly. She was frightened no doubt, but she wanted this, needed this. She wanted her innocence to be taken by this shadow that lurks in the night, wanted to be taken in the moonlight sky.

Sometimes we just need to be forced. Really. It happened to me ina park to one tieme and i couldn't stop myself from liking it either.

Brian or the author?

Women need a lot more than a big dick, so I'm presuming that this was written by a man.

As for the ending well, don't get me started.

A word of advice............ use your spell checker and proof read your efforts before printing them, better still get somebody else to do it.