All Comments on 'Sommer's Outdoor Delight'

Total enjoyment. Please post more. I think I am your first. (Reviewer)

Short, hot, sweet, sweaty and steamy all at once. Beautiful work.

I enjoyed it from the mystery of why he wanted her to go outside to the very last drop of cold water off ice. Excellent work.

Critique: I have to ponder your choice of categories. This with ice-play,leather,spanking, a bit of Dom/sub play could have possibly done better in either fetish or BDSM. If BDSM it would have been wise to include warning of "Light" play at the beginning so that the more "lifestyle" level folks knew what they were getting. Honestly other that that i saw nothing else to criticize.

Spectacular work, and I hope it does well in the contest for you.

MST