All Comments on 'Son Becomes Daughter Ch. 01'

I loved this, please keep it up! :)

Welcome new author. Please continue your story to fruition.

part 2 please

Good story line and sex, but could use some proofreading.

Can’t wait to see what happens next

Lots of typos.

This story was well written and enough pleasures added to keep one's mind occupied. I can't wait to see if there will be a sequel or if one has been added. I want to see GOOD THINGS come to this boy as he learns his new place in society.

The story line showed some promise but all the typos made it extremely hard to give it anymore than a 2. If you didnt have a proofreader, get one. If you did have a proofreader, find a different.

Love the story line, hope it is going where I think it is going, hoping that there a set of real breasts coming for him.

An a new girly name for him...Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

more, more, tell us more....PLEASE!

very nice cant wait for more :D

I enjoyed the story hope you follow thru on more chapters I would like to see what they put him thru. The roads are endless so I hope you pick a good one and develop it well. Thanks again good job

you really need to work on the grammar

Great beginning. Please continue.

Utterly Scrumptious 💋

You really need to proofread your story before posting. Not sure why he now has to crossdress, just because his mother caught him masturbating while wearing her panties. I'm guessing English isn't your native language and if that's correct, not a bad job, just get an editor and proof read if you ever decide to write and publish again.