by grimbous
I love the happy twist this story has taken, appreciate you for sharing this series with us!!!
Hell yea! I loved this chapter. Even though it was missing smut, it is such a good story it doesnt really matter. This just builds the tension and sets the scene for what is to come. Loved that kiki has seemingly gotten clean, for now. Also love how her and Donny are hitched, v cute. Cant wait for more!
I loved the way the intimacy all took place in their minds; after all, the brain is the largest sexual organ in the body, male or female. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
I just started reading this last night and I'm already in love with the story. Such a wonderful balance between smut and proper story telling. You truly have a gift and I can't wait to continue on.
Your writing style has improved immeasurably from the publication of Charlie, but still keeps the heartfelt connection, story building background, and visceral description needed for this kind of tale. I'd love you to do a saga about a young man in love with an African American theater owner trying to keep the business alive. Lots of potential lore in there about old cinema, the trials of retail, and the deep need for escape from reality as a young man