All Comments on 'Soon Pt. 03'

Another great chapter!

5

Wonderful tale, thank you for sharing. What a pleasant way to start the day.

Rnebular

Loved it. It was a good simple feel good story. Thanks for writing it.

Loved it. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story and warm loveable characters.

Great story!

5

Fantastic story. 5*

Loved the story. Had to go looking for part 3 when it didn't show up in the same category as the first two! As I said, loved the story line, but felt like the ending was rushed and cramped just to try to finish the story. You spend so much time and effort in the first two chapters developing the characters and going into their feelings, and then just ended it by so "hey I'm rich and we're getting married, the end..." Would love to see another chapter with more expanse.

After reading the comment from Throwback67, I realized there should be more to the story. Several thoughts are running through my head but nothing seems quite right. I'll work on it and see what I can do.

I loved the story, so sweet. Do feel that it could have expanded on how they will make it work, their happiness, and overall life together. Really I just love the characters so much I want to visit with them some more.

Fantastic, brought tears to my eyes. Loved it. 5*

With respect

DG Hear

Speechless ...... What a love story and so a happy end covid times are welcomed ...... Your are an gifted excellent writer ...... Thank you for sharing and yeah the end was a bit rushed

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Extremely well done. I would like to see it continue til poppy shares her life

Rambling on and on for three parts just to make on the third part some rushed ending😩