All Comments on 'Sophia's World Pt. 05'

On the top of your game. Kaori’s a winner. Best of the series so far.

I like the way you establish the atmosphere. It actually feels like you are in Tokyo.

It makes such a difference to a story when the author clearly knows something about the place where it is set. Little local details like the Kobe beef restaurant makes the story come alive.

The sex scenes benefit from being less wordy than in earlier chapters. The chemistry between the players is good and believable.

Odd error in posting my comment — surely my problem. Loved this piece/love your Sophia character, though not crazy about Pt. 4 piece. So repeat what ended up after Pt. 4 but intended for your Pt. 5 - ahhhhh (scream). Absolutely superb — the setting, crisp/erotically charged dialogue and intense sex — so revealing as it should be in good erotic fiction. Sophia — an intriguing character about which too much is never enough.

I have a sneaky feeling that Peter will get his claws into this Kaori at some point!