by Alice_Nicol
Kaori, along with Honey, is the strongest female character you have created in your supporting cast. This was a top, top episode.
A more relaxed “normal” time for Sophia back home as this piece focuses on Peter’s sex with Kaori. Curious/interesting, and maybe just me, but Peter’s moments of sex described with less intensity/less immersion than Sophia’s — yes, graphic and his “conquests” depicted bit tongue in cheek as you follow Kaori’s POV. Probably overthinking and the storyline is her world, but, hey, part of fun in reading erotic fiction is letting yourself get rapped up in the characters and storyline (to the author’s credit).