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Click here"Look at me Bitch!" Sophie ordered. I looked up at Sophie tears in my blue eyes, urine and spit on my face, opening my mouth. The flashes blinding me as Sophie snapped pictures of me, "My Mom will love these Whore!" She said with a evil smirk.
"Please, please I'll do anything you want," I pleaded and begged.
"Remember that Slut! I'm going to be around a lot I decided to attend Chicago State." Sophie's words cutting through me.
Always wonderful to hear from readers good and bad and as I have written before some my stories of take turns down dark roads much like life it is in those dark places we find who we really are thanks for reading my works. Love Cheri XOXO
Really needs editing. Lots of misspellings, unfinished sentences, and bad continuity issues (fingering during scissoring?). The sudden change in Sophie is too abrupt and extreme, no basis for it earlier in the story. And when does a successful attorney not reject corprophagia? A label of Nonconsent/reluctance doesn’t mean a character just accepts whatever is happening like flipping a light switch. There needs to be struggle, there needs to be obvious force and/or coercion.
Well I don't know what that was, it certainly wasn't erotic, that's one author off my reading list with no hope of reprieve.
Slightly revised version of 2 part Sophie’s Choice with sinister closing. Like it but liked earlier version as well.