All Comments on 'Sophie and The Professor'

Do you EVER read your typing? The misspelled words will pass spellcheck but have no meaning in your sentences. It makes the story very lame.

The writing, phrases and phrasing were pretty ho-hum. Always, always reread and then have someone else check for errors, omissions and misused words. As noted, spelchek is not trustworthy. Not too bad, in your case but is a jaring note when reading a story. Try some more.

Agree with the others. Phrasing and spelling are glaring errors. The story line is kind of fun though. Consider this a first draft and build on it. It could be a very hot little story.

so regardless of the comments made by others, this story did it for me. I just wish I'd been able to be as bold (and skilled) as this young lady, with a certain teaching assistant named Jack. Sigh.