All Comments on 'Sophie in the Stocks'

Wow! very hot, loved it.

Thank you @melsdad!

'Sophie' must take credit - the stocks were her idea. I just fleshed out the detail. Glad you enjoyed it and many thanks for the comment - I'm relatively new to writing for an audience and its very encouraging to get positive comments.

Little credible ...

Wow! A non-consensual story that wasn't absurdly cruel and in fact, showed some compassion for the victim! I'm impressed and I liked the story. Non-consent can be very hot and exciting sex. It need not be punitive beyond the pale. I liked that the "victim" was not allowed to be physically harmed, and that she actually enjoyed at least some of what happened to her. I was left to wonder who her mysterious "protector" might have been, and maybe we will find out in another of your stories :) Great writing!

@anon little credible - thanks for giving it a try.

@anon wow! - thank you so much for your generous comment! I'm glad the balance of cruelty and enjoyment worked for you.

Sorry but it was stupid. She was locked out of her room by George. He should have been in the stocks.

@BH54 thanks for taking the time to comment. Of course you're right, but as the story makes clear, this isn't a world that treats women fairly. Unfortunately, in that sense, the story is true-to-life.

I enjoyed this and it was very well written compared to many other non consent stories on here. At the moment I wouldn't actually put it past the Tory party bringing in what you put in the story!

PS fuck the Tories!!!

@rocketskate - it's always a risky business putting politics into stories - I'm glad someone appreciated it :)

Thanks so much for the comment and kind words

DNF Just no. I’m sorry but it’s a ridiculous concept an ultra conservative morality law to prevent any PDA or vaguely erotic clothing being offset by a license to commit rape on any person unfortunate enough to be outdoors that one day per month? It’s open to so much abuse that it’s just not even funny.

Random girl gets locked outside by bullies, a couple have an argument and he locks her outside, homeless people = victims, a man cheats on his wife and tells her she has to put up with it or he’ll lock her outside. Nothing about this promotes morality. What makes you think that forced gang rape is sexy? No protection from STDs or pregnancy unless they don’t exist in this horror story either?

Tess (uk)

"A brilliant story, very enjoyable to read. I ask you to ignore your non-literary critics. The idea of the sentence being converted into an alternative punishment is something that I like immensely."

@ Np81la - thanks! I don’t mind the critics - but also love to hear when someone enjoys what they read.