All Comments on 'Soren and His Sisters'

I really enjoyed this story; it's different and hope you keep up the great work.

Held my interest. Left wondering if Kyle will join Cyn in her private contracting business.

all the cheating and blackmail was a real turn off. please keep the garbage out of the incest area.

You lost me at the word "Dreadlocks".

While a very intersting story it got complicated and confusing quickly

Thanks to everyone who has read this story. I appreciate your time and any constructive comments that you may have. I am very grateful to the persons who have favourited this story as well. With so few persons having read it, to have two favourites makes this my most successful offering here to date.

I should like to point out that I did NOT submit this as an "Incest" story, but rather as a "Romance" between Cyn and Kyle. I am just as disappointed to see it here as you are though I am not surprised. Second, all of my stories are about Jamaicans and set in Jamaica, and I happen to wear dreadlocks myself; so if you're squeamish about them then you'll be wasting your time reading any of my work since all of my female leads, and some of the men, will wear dreads too.

This story was remarkably well written and executed, but I wonder if it really belongs on a website like Literotica: despite the sexual undercurrents it is really more of a thriller than erotica. You certainly deserve commendation for the work, but for its writing and imagination, not for its sexual appeal. The story could easily stand on its own merits. Nice work.

very tightly woven story line. Only noticed 1 error (wondering instead of wandering) so your editing was outstanding. Hopefully you have written more and will continue to entertain us. Thank you.

This story is one of the best I've read. I hope you continue to write more. :)

I really enjoyed reading this =D it has kind of a Mr

and Mrs smith feel to it lol hope you write more

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was very well written with fine detail and lots of arousing content. Bravo!

I loved it it had great intrigue

I think she's my type too