by AnotherOldWriter
liked it, well written, the photo shoot got a little tedious..all in all, good story.
Excellent hazing story! It was really fun to follow Willow through all that. She really turned out to be a surprise at the end! Nice work! I hope there'll be more.
One of the best sorority hazing stories I have ever read. There is still the next three weeks we need to hear about, But please do it as a chapter two and not change the tittle. then after the three weeks we need to hear about the "Back to nature" trip. so we are looking at least two more chapter or even maybe more. We need to hear about the random guys need to sucking, we need to hear about the exhibition they go through we need to hear about the sisters that they have to service. WOW you can do a lot with where you left this. You can tell when you wrote great story when readers fantasy mind work overtime. JOB WELL DONE! 5 stars
True confession, i hate college frats and sororities... Generally a bunch of stuck-up fucks caught up in nonsense hoping to be perceived better than the the rest of us... But this was a nicer version, and a pleasant story. And I was rooting for Willow!!! Glad she finished the shoot, glad she got the big dick off, and very glad that big dick gonna treat her to dinner then fuck her brains out!!!