All Comments on 'Soul Awakening'

by ezlay_2nite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
More please

Can't wait to read the next installment. This had me hard in seconds. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Oh brother

Figures... a woman doing the 'assaulting'. Don't you people EVER get tired of girl on girl? Also, where the hell is this elevator? It takes half an hour to reach 69 floors?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
SOUNDING GOOD

Can't wait for your next installment

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Shock!

Whew! I never thought it would end that way, that was so exciting! Can you make some stories like that again but this time in a train or in a bus in standing, or in a theather in standing ovation..whew! it makes me crazy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

loved the story. It really got my imagination and other things going. Hope there is more to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I'm impressed...

Very vivid and real. The ending was a little confusing but overall I really enjoyed it. Keep up the work and let's see another chapter in this story.

cantdogcantdogover 19 years ago
Delightful fantasy!

Sweet as nutmeats and perhaps a little unreal and silly, but involving and rewardingly hot at the climax. I hear this is a first effort anywhere, not just here. Keep writing! You have a flair for it, and you can develop it here as well as anywhere. It'll be a good time for us while you do that!

catfishcatfishabout 19 years ago
That was fun

Would love to read the next installment, very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
An inviting experience

Moving as it is unusual. The smile sealed it. Until lunch I hear is now the pass word in our elevators.

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