by ezlay_2nite
Can't wait to read the next installment. This had me hard in seconds. Thanks.
Figures... a woman doing the 'assaulting'. Don't you people EVER get tired of girl on girl? Also, where the hell is this elevator? It takes half an hour to reach 69 floors?
Whew! I never thought it would end that way, that was so exciting! Can you make some stories like that again but this time in a train or in a bus in standing, or in a theather in standing ovation..whew! it makes me crazy!
loved the story. It really got my imagination and other things going. Hope there is more to follow.
Very vivid and real. The ending was a little confusing but overall I really enjoyed it. Keep up the work and let's see another chapter in this story.
Sweet as nutmeats and perhaps a little unreal and silly, but involving and rewardingly hot at the climax. I hear this is a first effort anywhere, not just here. Keep writing! You have a flair for it, and you can develop it here as well as anywhere. It'll be a good time for us while you do that!
Moving as it is unusual. The smile sealed it. Until lunch I hear is now the pass word in our elevators.