All Comments on 'Soul Out, Soul In'

by ElizzyViolet

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longtermsub1994longtermsub1994over 4 years ago
Craving for more!

Was a great appetiser. Any plans to serialise?

PaulplaysPaulplaysover 4 years ago
Oh Yes!

What a beautiful erotic submission!

I want more......

....take me, too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I don't know if your story is good or not. I couldn't deal with the avalanche of adjectives. Hint: More words are not always better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Just one request: next time, please warn me that this plays perfectly into all my desires!

BraddykinkBraddykinkabout 4 years ago
Nice work

Short and sweet. Thought Bianca could’ve been a bit more menacing. With a bit more foreplay. Maybe getting kinkier as it goes. But I guess that’s just me. Honestly though. Good job

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I have a Patreon now! You can get early story access and see exclusive content by joining: https://www.patreon.com/ElizzyViolet Hello world! I'm a freelance writer who posts erotic stories with the hope of bringing enjoyment to everyone. I've been doing this since 2017 and ha...