All Comments on 'South Tower - The Security Guard's Tale Pt. 04'

Enjoyed this story a lot, it was nice to see the transformations happening from an outsider's perspective. I liked the back and forth on whether Lance was sympathizing with the girls or going to take advantage of the situation. I was kind of hoping to see some last minute final corruption of Mallory, but the way you wrapped things up with her was relatively sweet and heartwarming. Keep up the good work, hope there's more coming!

Thank you! There's actually more coming in this one but I totally scrapped what was originally part 5 and 6 for a full rewrite