All Comments on 'Southern Visit'

by masochisticpuppy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
This story seems to be missing a beginning and

and end. Its been 8 months so I assue that there will be no chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more!

Please write a part two! it has great potential!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
pleasepleaseplease

write more about rai and her master!!!! this was such a great story, i would love to hear more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More, please!

Please write at least one more chapter!

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