All Comments on 'Southland Packs New Alpha Ch. 02'

Its a good thing if Fiona has some prior knowledge of Weres that way she doesn't do the normal freaking out as Holly stated. But if she had a bad experience with a Were then its going to suck for Marcus.

Heads up, but I think you had Fiona as a red head in chapter one. She seems to have shifted towards brown hair.

on the red head to brunette thing. other than that excellent! love this story, hope to see more soon.

it's a great story, hope the next chapter is out real soon.

Hope the next chapter is out quick...great

Marcus is kind of an ass. Not feeling this relationship at all.

Marcus is certainly behaving like an ass, and so was her brother Bradley. The story is moving a little fast. Fiona shouldn't be comfortable enough to just lay back down and go to sleep, even if she does have some knowledge of weres.

good story... when is the next chapter coming?!!!

I agree with the last comment, and would love for you to continue the story!

It would be a shame to, ' NOT ' continue this story. The possibilities are endless. More please ...