by Saphhia
first page and a half got 5 stars the last half of page two got 3 stars so i gave the whole story 4 stars. Love the plot as well as the writing. Will she ever return to the human race? If she does will she remain a slave girl to her sister on her own? easy chapter 2 . thank you for sharing. Pappasleaze!
Thank you so much for your positive feedback, and comments. Interesting point. I have never in all my experience writing on this sight received more positive interest in a story as this one has generated. Interesting then, that it also has the lowest ratings of any story I've written to date. I think people read stories without even reading the subject matter and are therefore offended by the content. Regardless, I am going to continue this storyline.
You go Saphhia. Wonder when Megan will groom her sister and take her to the fair and show her with the shoats, pigs and brood sows?
Hi Saphhia,
I recently found your stories and started following you. This one showed up in my feed. I loved it. I love your writing style. I like to read stories where characters are reduced to less than human form, it turns me on in a strange way. Although I never really had the nerve to write anything like it myself. It takes special talent to be able to write something like this. I loved your skinning the Kat and Baring it all as well. I hope to read more from you. Please don't keep me waiting for long!
Hope you continue this. I would love to see how ugly and dehumanized you'll go with this.
Why don't make her lose all of the weight now and go back to using her as sex slave with all the farm boys learning how to fuck, Specially With that nice mouth of hers now. And eat Megan's creampies.
Hi, disturbing. I think I missed some thing about this story and I hope you can help me with, ok? It seems that the sister had some kind of problem with it other, that I get, but why? At the beginning it gave the idea of a simple fight between sisters, but at the end when the younger sister turned the older into a sow, it was so ... and how the other didn't noticed she was becoming fat. Ah I wasnt saying that it was bad, I only really didn't understood from where all that hatred come!