All Comments on 'Spaceflights of Fancy Ch. 01'

I won't be continuing this story because I dislike the characters. Damien is such an idiot, and I understand that's intentional, but I'm still annoyed by him. Mimi putting up with his antics is frustrating and does little to endear me to her character and their relationship. Not only does she feel like his mother(and not the hot kind), but she doesn't respect him regardless of his specific talents.

In the beginning, I thought Mimi would ditch her boyfriend for the bull, which would have been a better direction in my opinion. At least her and the bull had mutual respect for each other, and there was attraction between them.

On a more positive note, I did enjoy your world building.