All Comments on 'Special Delivery'

Good premise.

Too automatic. Too mechanical. No tension at all.

Nothing with her breasts? Why? He'd been looking at them, admiring them, and she had to have noticed.

She could have asked him of he'd thought about them. Imagined them. Jerked off to them. What had he imagined? Would he like to see them?

And you should have specified "Tags".

Three stars.