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by Daveindenver

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Your Story

has been mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout which can be found in the Bulletin Boards.

AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 17 years ago
The story was ok....

I thought this showed the uncertainess of the first one, even in this case where the girl does it for a delivery guy. My only complaints are that you used a real pizza place. Not that the guys there wouldn't try it, but maybe I am being technical.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 13 years ago
nice

story sounds nice. sometimes, spontaneous things happen and she went with it. nice!

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I started writing erotic literature after experiencing a vivid dream about a co-worker. I had been quite attracted to her, and as both of us were married and we lived in a rather conservative community, I did not act on that attraction. After dreaming of her, I wrote the exper...