by loveonthebus
Reminds me of the pagan Year King scenario, a man is chosen to be treated like a king for a year every whim catered to until the end of that year at which point he was ritually sacrificed.
Tess (uk)
I appreciate that you didn't spend more time than necessary dwelling on the premise - we simply need to accept it, and then you can get on with the business of sexually abusing a nubile cocktease. The public angle was good too; I would have enjoyed more verbal degradation from the peanut gallery. If you continue this series, I hope Andrew doesn't lose his fondness for casual, arbitrary cruelty!
I'd definitely read more of this. Great story, and telling it entirely from her perspective was a nice touch. Keep "Andrew" an unknown force. Just something people have to accept.
I definitely want to see Rhianna get it from Andrew just as badly. She did get off the bus just as he did, after all. From Yalena's pov Rhianna deserves it.
I second ShibboletParty's comment about the premise. "Yeah, it's dumb, but just roll with it and focus on enjoying this really detailed blowjob scene." The non-generic detailed blowjob makes this a 5/5 for me since it lets me ignore everything else in the story and just think "damn that's hot".
Loved the premise of a man who gets what he wants and is a staple that is just accepted by society.