All Comments on 'Special Service Rendered Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Crap

wtraskwtraskalmost 2 years agoAuthor

I know... not enough sex to start it off... too much set up...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The whole thing came across as non erotic to me. Awesome that you have included some plot/ background, however given that these people have recently changed their security system and no alarms were triggered makes him a very obvious suspect to the police.

I was confused by the byline referring to the rapist as a “second story man” I’ve no idea what that means? The story title infers that this scenario is prearranged?

Tess (uk)

wtraskwtraskalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Second story man is a old term meaning thief.

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